Give me a life
Give me a life to rejoice
Let’s discover an island of bliss
sit by those blue waters
keeping our eyes on each other
none will dare to seize us
Stars will appear like a dream
Moon will skim on the water
Except our sighs
there will be the fragrance of silence
Give me the shore of your own
to discover the ultimate
Let’s feel the infinite love
in that time of sand
I love you like the sky
that hides the moon in vein
I love you like my soul
secluded with a brim of hope
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Hello Vijay,
Well written. Good one. Let's discover an island of bliss was a very good line :-)
Cheers,
Madhuri
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FRAGRANCE OF LOVE......what a beautiful coinage..Nice poem Vijay..Happy I am here. Should go through all your blogs soon. Shall.
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Vijay,
Beautiful poem!! I have no words to express the beauty!
Cheers
Meera
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Vijay,
Very nice indeed, I like your descriptive use of words... honest and easy... like a young man in love and looking for the right words that describe what he feels in his soul. Yes, cold hearted old Marine here is a sucker for a good love poem.
Viv
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Hi vijayraghav,
Enjoyed reading this ...Uma
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aah vijay .very nicely expressed ..hope is abiding , no doubt jaijui
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A very nice poem indeed! Vijay.
Julia
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Hi Vijayraghav,
Nice love-song... :-)
Liked the expression !
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Beautifully expressed. Liked it very much.
Sue
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vijay
nice
bina
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